Coursework: Sleeper Feedback

After receiving some constructive criticism from our showcase, we decided that we needed to alter some of our film to make it appeal more to a mass audience. After seeing it played on a bigger screen we found there were some serious issues with the lighting and there were some bits that were so dark it was impossible to see what was happening in the scene. We corrected the lighting on these shots and were very happy with the results. We also cut some of our credits as they ran for too long and turned down some of the digetic sound as it overpowered the music.